<WIP><ambient> Untitled Saddle Arabia Inspired Lullaby

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<WIP><ambient> Untitled Saddle Arabia Inspired Lullaby

Postby Emkay » 18 Dec 2012 20:54

https://soundcloud.com/emkay-mlp/untitled-saddle-arabia

I just really need some fresh ears for this. Thoughts?
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Re: <WIP><ambient> Untitled Saddle Arabia Inspired Lullaby

Postby Twy » 19 Dec 2012 00:27

I really like the punctuating drum beats throughout the piece a lot. The track reminds me of the kind of thing you'd hear in a Final Fantasy-esque rpg or something.

Really the only thing I would consider changing is at about 0:48 where the Oud ish instrument comes in, it seems to me to come in just a touch too loudly. I think the volume is good after you get a moment to get used to it, so I would probably automate the volume a bit or something, personally.

But that's the kind of nit-picky sort of complaint that's pretty subjective too, I think. Anyway, I think the track is solid. I like it.
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Re: <WIP><ambient> Untitled Saddle Arabia Inspired Lullaby

Postby Emkay » 19 Dec 2012 01:34

Twy wrote:I really like the punctuating drum beats throughout the piece a lot. The track reminds me of the kind of thing you'd hear in a Final Fantasy-esque rpg or something.

Really the only thing I would consider changing is at about 0:48 where the Oud ish instrument comes in, it seems to me to come in just a touch too loudly. I think the volume is good after you get a moment to get used to it, so I would probably automate the volume a bit or something, personally.

But that's the kind of nit-picky sort of complaint that's pretty subjective too, I think. Anyway, I think the track is solid. I like it.

I was thinking the same thing actually. A bit too aggressive for something that's supposed to be a lullaby, haha.
Thanks for the feedback, though. =D
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Re: <WIP><ambient> Untitled Saddle Arabia Inspired Lullaby

Postby Twy » 19 Dec 2012 03:30

Oh really? Haha, well fancy that.

Hey no problem. Sorry I couldn't be of more help than pointing out things you'd already thought of. Congratulations on the music, though, and keep up the good work!
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