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Postby vladnuke » 13 Dec 2012 02:26

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this one sure is something.
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Re: <non-poni> <idm> Suspect

Postby vladnuke » 16 Dec 2012 15:39

Ok, now that we have more people commenting here, lets try this again:

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Re: <non-poni> <idm> Suspect

Postby GumsOfGabby » 17 Dec 2012 11:32

I think the mix could use some work, so turn everything DOWN (or atleast the limiter pre gain you have on the master channel)! Your track is pumping like crazy and it makes listening to it hard. I would also advise against using much stereo delay on the bass as it will cause phasing problems on a mono speaker system. The chord progression doesn't make sense, is the track in a specific key?
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Re: <non-poni> <idm> Suspect

Postby randomblockfilms » 18 Dec 2012 13:02

old time audio is awesome :D though i think some of the samples like at 0:57 could be turned down a bit. and idk why but i feel like some compression at like 1:36 could make it sounds better but im not sure really. thats just me thinkin' randomly :P

but it does sound intresting. kinda almost like a soundtrack to a commercial or something.
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Re: <non-poni> <idm> Suspect

Postby vladnuke » 18 Dec 2012 17:35

GumsOfGabby wrote:I think the mix could use some work, so turn everything DOWN (or atleast the limiter pre gain you have on the master channel)! Your track is pumping like crazy and it makes listening to it hard. I would also advise against using much stereo delay on the bass as it will cause phasing problems on a mono speaker system. The chord progression doesn't make sense, is the track in a specific key?


Yeah, I get what you're saying, I'll try to mix this a whole lot better for the album. Maybe get rid of the lowpass intro thing. There's no stereo delay on the bass, but that might just be a result of phasing, so I'll definetly pick that apart. I was meaning to just throw out that melody completly and put in a new one, touch it up. I'm definelty gonna be working on this one before it goes on anything.
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