<original, pony, rap> Baleston Days

[MALevolence]

hey, another new rap. it was written before sensations, but i release things in an odd order. anyways, tell me what you think! i love feedback.

[Stu Beef]

Hey, this ain't bad dude. You've got a lot of the basic concepts down; I'm diggin your flow and your lyrics aren't too shabby either for what it is. Right now, it seems to me that you just need to keep at it, hone your skills, and really find your voice. You sound sorta uncertain and unenergized now. I dig dudes who have that kinda understated approach, but there's a difference between unaffected and unconfident, know what I mean?

I'd like to see what you can do with a real subject: something that matters to you personally; I'm missing a lot of emotion in your performance.

[MALevolence]

I'd like to see what you can do with a real subject: something that matters to you personally; I'm missing a lot of emotion in your performance.

thanks man! if you really wanna see some non pony stuff, i recommend checking out my youtube page. it seems like some of the most common responses i get are that i seem to be lacking emotion. sad to me, considering i put a lot into my rapping. but i understand. its all about finding how to convey my tone better i suppose. anyways, thanks for the feedback

[bigBerd]

"but the problem is publication
public education doesnt give much of a reputation"
...heard that and I was like, "whaaaaat"

I'm diggin the straight flow you're rolling with on this one. It sounds like you took a bunch of dope shit you brainstormed at various times and smooshed them together on one dope track. It's got its nicks and imperfections here and there but for the most part this rap is fukken bomb.

[MALevolence]

"but the problem is publication
public education doesnt give much of a reputation"
...heard that and I was like, "whaaaaat"
I'm diggin the straight flow you're rolling with on this one. It sounds like you took a bunch of dope shit you brainstormed at various times and smooshed them together on one dope track. It's got its nicks and imperfections here and there but for the most part this rap is fukken bomb.

haha, sweet! honestly, i really felt it in this track. i heard h8s music and was like, shit man i gotta rap on this. i had that idea in mind and just got goin.
and those lines ring true man. getting stuff out there and recognized is hard as hell, and when youre just another face in the crowd, it gets even harder.