(Original)(Pony) Kyoga - Under the Night Sky

[TheMalenEst]

Love it you are amazing on the guitar!

[MALevolence]

the intro builds well i think, not too overwhelming but still containing a strong punch. the overall melody in the background feels complete and steady, easy to memorize so the focus can be drawn to the lead.
i feel like there are a few instances here and there where the lead doesnt time up with the melody, however they are few and relatively far between and most likely unnoticeable as the piece progresses. yeah, they dont seem to stick out so much as the guitar continues, so no worries.
the decrescendo around the 5ish min mark is well timed i think. and the reentrance just continues that feeling.
the ending works for me, you know, as an ending. i like it. it feels final. however, i wouldve liked if you finished your fantastic shredding before fading out.
overall, very nice piece of instrumental music with the huge guitar focus. i really liked it.
EDIT: i went and checked this out on youtube. saw the description. yes, yes you conveyed those emotions perfectly. well i mean, as perfect as perfect gets, right? i felt them at least. extra thumbs up for feeling conveyment.

[MALevolence]

fair enough. i can definitely see/hear what you were trying to do. i suppose with your artist take it does make sense, it just wasnt my favorite cup of tea i suppose. still, i thoroughly enjoyed it, and even though the ending isnt my taste, it in no way detracts from the overall essence of the song and i would not count it as any strike against it. again, well done. ive subscribed to you on youtube as well, awaiting your next pieces with eager enthusiams.

[GhostXb]

I freakin love this! You did a great job, the guitar sounds fantastic! My only nit pick is that it doesn't seem to progress too much. I feel like the transition at 4:17 came a little too late.

Have you ever heard of the bands Tides of Nebula and Kwoon? This kind of reminds of that kind of music, as well as Pink Floyd.

[GhostXb]

I'd suggest checking them out, they're great bands, and relevant to the kind of music you make.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FBH3wObZ1qU