(Pony, Original) "The Magnificent Funk Blaster 6000"

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(Pony, Original) "The Magnificent Funk Blaster 6000"

Postby Random111223 » 17 Oct 2012 12:54

edit: finished
*Octavia and her bros are playing some beats with her orchestra*
But what's this? Flim and Flam storm in with their newest invention, The Magnificent Funk Blaster 6000!

http://soundcloud.com/rand0m-2/the-magnificent-funkblaster


Not really sure of the genre, funkhop? electro-swing? glitch hop? Dunno :lol: Tell me what you think!
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Re: (Pony, Original, WIP) "The Magnificent Funk Blaster 6000

Postby ChocolateChicken » 17 Oct 2012 19:50

It sounds like you were somehow able to get your hands on the Tombstone drum samples.

I like that you released the song at 0:40 when the vocals came in. I think that the snare should also take a break at some point in the song, since they are playing constantly throughout the song except for a brief few seconds at 1:07 while they come back during the buildup via automation.

At the drop at 1:14 when the vocal sample says "What'dya say, sista?" you should try cutting out all of the instruments for that instant, except for the vocal sample, to make the drop more steep. A sudden silence is commonplace for most drops because it increases the suspense RIGHT before everything jumps back in. Try it and see what you think.

The main synth you have after the drop at 1:16 is very cool, but it sounds like there's a lot missing from this section overall. Try adding more synths here. I would try adding some synths to play chords behind the lead synths.

Also, besides the kick, snare, and the crash, there is an undeniable absence of percussion diversity. See if you have any room to add some hihats or toms to make things more interesting.
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Re: (Pony, Original, WIP) "The Magnificent Funk Blaster 6000

Postby Random111223 » 17 Oct 2012 20:39

It sounds like you were somehow able to get your hands on the Tombstone drum samples.

Haha, nope :lol:
I like that you released the song at 0:40 when the vocals came in. I think that the snare should also take a break at some point in the song, since they are playing constantly throughout the song except for a brief few seconds at 1:07 while they come back during the buildup via automation.

The main synth you have after the drop at 1:16 is very cool, but it sounds like there's a lot missing from this section overall. Try adding more synths here. I would try adding some synths to play chords behind the lead synths.

I'll see what i can do!
Also, besides the kick, snare, and the crash, there is an undeniable absence of percussion diversity. See if you have any room to add some hihats or toms to make things more interesting.

Yeh, i usually add percussion as one of the last things so haven't done that yet.

Thanks for the input<3
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Re: (Pony, Original) "The Magnificent Funk Blaster 6000"

Postby VaporBlaze » 18 Oct 2012 15:39

I really liked it! Weird, fusion, screw all conception of genre style. Flim Flam voice clip was well placed. GJ!
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Re: (Pony, Original, WIP) "The Magnificent Funk Blaster 6000

Postby Matthew N. » 19 Oct 2012 03:29

ChocolateChicken wrote:It sounds like you were somehow able to get your hands on the Tombstone drum samples.


You mean Pendulum drum samples.


Anyway, this has a scent of dubstep in it, yet it's so groovy that my fingers automatically go into tap-the-desk mode. Loving it.
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Re: (Pony, Original) "The Magnificent Funk Blaster 6000"

Postby Big AppleDoom » 19 Oct 2012 03:55

Brilliant!
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