Maybe i got a Brony talent

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Maybe i got a Brony talent

Postby Mikel2N » 14 Oct 2012 21:15

Well i'm trying to make SO GOOD dubstep music, sooo i hope you like it :] : http://youtu.be/eeAv3BNU33o if you suscribe, yo help me alot :D

If you want to be my team, we can talk through skype: mikeltoon_skype
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Re: Maybe i got a Brony talent

Postby vladnuke » 15 Oct 2012 01:09

Great visuals! But there were a few things I personally would have changed:
-The song doesn't follow any particular key, and just sounds discordant and grating.
-The lead is too flat. And also off key. And it's a bit boring.
- The vocal samples still have music attached to them.
-The tombsnare just plain cuts off, no release at all
-The bass has no low end and is also grating.
-It's not very well mixed.
-You kinda just repeated the same drop twice

So to recap, you should work on: sound design, structure, theory, and mixing.
But the visuals were nice! And the idea of the song was ok!
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