The Puppet Master (First attempt at dubshit!)

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The Puppet Master (First attempt at dubshit!)

Postby Versilaryan » 01 Oct 2011 00:08

http://soundcloud.com/versilaryan/the-puppet-master

First attempt at dubshit! I don't have much of an idea of where to go with this, so I'mma post it here for feedback while I figure things out.

I know for sure I'm going to add a heavily-reverbed drum hit right where it drops out -- it's a bitch to do in FL Studio, though, and I'm just procrastinating.

EDIT: Just gonna say, I have NO idea what FL studio did to my bass just there. It's not supposed to enter so suddenly like that. >.>
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Re: The Puppet Master (First attempt at dubshit!)

Postby Overkillius » 01 Oct 2011 00:18

the wubs sound odd compared to most dubstep I've heard... unfortunately I don't know much about dubstep! I really like the spot before the wubs though.
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Re: The Puppet Master (First attempt at dubshit!)

Postby natsukashi » 01 Oct 2011 08:17

I like the wubs, it's hard to describe but they feel more dynamic than usual brostep wubs. I'm looking forward to your next draft 'cause I liked it!
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Re: The Puppet Master (First attempt at dubshit!)

Postby Facade » 01 Oct 2011 09:33

these wubs are baws :o
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Re: The Puppet Master (First attempt at dubshit!)

Postby X-Trav » 01 Oct 2011 10:15

For a first attempt this is boss. I'd just say to mix it up a bit more and not have the same wub pattern repeating so often.
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Re: The Puppet Master (First attempt at dubshit!)

Postby Versilaryan » 01 Oct 2011 15:11

Thanks! I originally went for the more standard brostep wubwubs, but couldn't get the sound. xD So I went for my own sound instead.

X-Trav: Yeah, I didn't know what to do, so I just had it loop for a little bit at the end. I might keep it that long, but if I do, I'll be sure to change up the patterns so that it doesn't get too repetitive!
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Re: The Puppet Master (First attempt at dubshit!)

Postby Versilaryan » 03 Oct 2011 22:07

http://soundcloud.com/versilaryan/puppet-master

More progress! It's not really dubstep anymore (I don't think it ever was to begin with). It's house with wubwubs. Housestep!

Still not done. As you can tell with the ending, I'm going to do something there. I'm probably going to remove that drum hit thing because it and the wub don't get along very well.

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