<Pony> <Original/Electro> Go Out With A Rainboom

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<Pony> <Original/Electro> Go Out With A Rainboom

Postby Symphon » 23 Sep 2012 19:55

Hm... I just realized the abbreviation for that is G.O.W.A.R... GO WAR. YEAAAAAAAAAAH!

Ahem... Anyway.

I got some inspiration for some electro when I heard some Vinyl Scratch stuff on Soundcloud, so decided to make this. It was for the end of summer, kinda reflecting the Mane 6, specifically Rainbow, having to get back to work and stuff... Rainbow. Work. HA.

Anyway, have a song. That's what you came here for.

http://soundcloud.com/tunersymphon/end-it-with-a-rainboom
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Re: <Pony> <Original/Electro> Go Out With A Rainboom

Postby vladnuke » 24 Sep 2012 00:19

It's, um, experimental, I guess?

Everything is just plain all over the place, the synths are all mushy and muddy and nothing fits.
The hats are really quiet, the kick is almost nonexistent, the snare is too soft, there seems to be a lack of a key/structure.

I'm sorry, but I just don't see it.
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Re: <Pony> <Original/Electro> Go Out With A Rainboom

Postby Symphon » 24 Sep 2012 06:18

vladnuke wrote:It's, um, experimental, I guess?

Everything is just plain all over the place, the synths are all mushy and muddy and nothing fits.
The hats are really quiet, the kick is almost nonexistent, the snare is too soft, there seems to be a lack of a key/structure.

I'm sorry, but I just don't see it.


Maybe it's your speakers, because I've tried it on quite a few different ones, and the percussion is clear as day for me. Thanks for the feedback.
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Re: <Pony> <Original/Electro> Go Out With A Rainboom

Postby Nonsense_Profile » 24 Sep 2012 12:45

You really like the reverb affect huh?

No, I actually got some bose speaker system and it sound's good, the low end could use more, um, back up I guess. And the "Wah Wah/Yah Yah" synth is a bit muffled and just kinda sound's like it doesn't know what it want's to be when it grow's up, low frequency or high frequency

but good, production value none the less, the song itself is a little bland, kinda same-y as the bronies go.
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Re: <Pony> <Original/Electro> Go Out With A Rainboom

Postby Symphon » 24 Sep 2012 15:08

Nonsense_Profile wrote:You really like the reverb affect huh?

No, I actually got some bose speaker system and it sound's good, the low end could use more, um, back up I guess. And the "Wah Wah/Yah Yah" synth is a bit muffled and just kinda sound's like it doesn't know what it want's to be when it grow's up, low frequency or high frequency

but good, production value none the less, the song itself is a little bland, kinda same-y as the bronies go.


Yeah, right now, my biggest problem is mastering so things sound clear, honestly, and I really need to get a hang of it, and yeah, reverb tends make most things sound richer. To me, at least. I think that's the right wording. Thanks for the feedback!
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