<non-pony><jazz> Dinner at Sunset Town

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<non-pony><jazz> Dinner at Sunset Town

Postby Glitchhog » 20 Aug 2012 06:06

So, I hit 300 subs today (I KNOW, SO MANY HAHUEHUE) and put together a short jazz piece to celebrate. It is non-pony, but I'm still pretty happy with it. I may extend it later, not sure yet. Either way, enjoy.

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Re: <non-pony><jazz> Dinner at Sunset Town

Postby CDPP » 20 Aug 2012 06:44

Extend it! Disappointed that the piece didn't break out into full-fledged swing at the end, though.
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Re: <non-pony><jazz> Dinner at Sunset Town

Postby Joaftheloaf » 20 Aug 2012 10:33

OMG Yes Jazz! Ooh this is lovely!
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Re: <non-pony><jazz> Dinner at Sunset Town

Postby Kushy Kallous » 20 Aug 2012 14:12

I was feeling meh when I came into this thread,
Now I look out my window to the blue hue of a rainy day, feeling so much better.

Although I have nothing constructive to say, this was great!
Thank you. :)
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Re: <non-pony><jazz> Dinner at Sunset Town

Postby Glitchhog » 21 Aug 2012 23:32

Wow, this gathered far better reception than I was expecting! Thanks guys. =D
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Re: <non-pony><jazz> Dinner at Sunset Town

Postby LunchBagMusic » 22 Aug 2012 04:26

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The keys and the bass sound random and haphazard at the start without any kind of grounding in beat. While "free jazz" is cool and stuff, you can still pick a beat.

You don't need to add in drums, just make the bass a little more rhythmically commanding.
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Apart from that, well done! Good atmosphere and I like the subtle use of acciacauturas!
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