<non-pony>Kushy Kallous - Booming Popularity

[Kushy Kallous]

So, I'm basically working more and more on my actual raps, rather than the technical side, 'embellishing' as you say. I'm also trying to cut out random breaths, and making the rap sharper in general. Though, I don't think I'm quite hitting the mark with that either. Here is my latest rap, done over Nikki Layne's track - Ocean. Could I please get some advice on how I could possibly embellish this, or .. geeze I don't even know. Does this even need anything? It seems so naked..

[Nikki-Layne]

You alredy know my opinion of this

[vladnuke]

You could add some more reverb in the rap.