You're Next

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You're Next

Postby SteaksMusic » 17 Sep 2011 22:11

http://snd.sc/pDEDcb

Made for a person I really like on ponychan.
the music is based on Pinkie Pie.
a duet of violin and double bass

any comments/criticism is welcomed, thanks.
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Re: You're Next

Postby Dr_Dissonance » 17 Sep 2011 23:04

H'okay, firstly, welcome to the forums!

Secondly, this was good! I REALLY liked your use of counterpoint, it was very well crafted and I rarely comment on counterpoint anywhere in the pony musicverse! :D

Maybe for improvements, make it more dynamic. It was largely the same dynamic throughout and classical sounding stuff is very big on the dynamics! Also, those glissandos sounded unnatural, but I guess that's something that can't be helped...

If you extend it, add some more variation too!

Great to have someone such as yourself here!
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So we’ll hunt you. Because you can take it. Because you’re not our hero.
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A doctor of dissonance.
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Re: You're Next

Postby SteaksMusic » 18 Sep 2011 00:05

I tried my best to adjust the velocities of the notes.
(from pppp (pianissississimo-10) to ffff(fortissississimo - 145)
I'll be using a new program to make musics from now on, so maybe that might help.

I'll try to figure out the gliss out though :)

thanks
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Re: You're Next

Postby Dr_Dissonance » 18 Sep 2011 01:10

SteaksMusic wrote:I'll try to figure out the gliss out though :)



If you do, please tell me, as I have yet to figure out the secret of natural sounding glissandos without using real strings! :P
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So we’ll hunt you. Because you can take it. Because you’re not our hero.
You’re a silent guardian of music, a watchful protector of songs.
A doctor of dissonance.
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Re: You're Next

Postby SteaksMusic » 18 Sep 2011 01:34

yeh... would be nice if I know how to do vibrato first, would make it a lot easier.
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