<pony><original><melodic dubstep> Beauty of the Night

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<pony><original><melodic dubstep> Beauty of the Night

Postby Hangin' From A Cloud » 11 Aug 2012 16:20

Okay, so here's a song I made about 2 weeks ago, but just posting it now. Until now I hadn't really been asking for any feedback,but I know that's the only way I'm gonna get any better (if at all.)

So umm... what do you think?

"Sheogorath took hold of the petulant women and ripped her asunder. From her tendons he made lutes [...] and thus Music was born!"
/Myths of Sheogorath/
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Re: <pony><original><melodic dubstep> Beauty of the Night

Postby soultensionbenjamin » 11 Aug 2012 16:41

the kicks could use a little more thump.
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Re: <pony><original><melodic dubstep> Beauty of the Night

Postby Sai » 11 Aug 2012 16:48

This has a really nice feel to it, it's got a good lead sound and I like the use of strings at about 2:13, too.
The vocal samples seem really quiet though; I think you could maybe do with bringing them out a bit more.

(also, shouldn't your signature say "...ripped her asunder."?)
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Re: <pony><original><melodic dubstep> Beauty of the Night

Postby Hangin' From A Cloud » 12 Aug 2012 03:31

I might go back to it a little and fix things. Thanks for the input.

(sig. fixed)
"Sheogorath took hold of the petulant women and ripped her asunder. From her tendons he made lutes [...] and thus Music was born!"
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Re: <pony><original><melodic dubstep> Beauty of the Night

Postby Melodosis » 12 Aug 2012 16:36

More bass! and pump up those drums a little bit. Good job anyway. :)
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Re: <pony><original><melodic dubstep> Beauty of the Night

Postby SpyPie » 12 Aug 2012 16:42

The Kicks could use a little Compressing, just a tiny bit.
Moar Sub Bass.
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Other than that. This is some pretty nice stuff. I enjoyed it :)
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