by Doctor Science » 26 Jul 2012 15:28
Sounds pretty great! At times it seems a bit too loud and there is some clipping/distortion. Overall, it feels a bit too heavy in the lower-middle register, and I think the piano is a bit overbearing. The crash cymbal at the beginning and the end feels a little weird, as you don't seem to use percussion anywhere else in the piece. Also watch out for a little bit of noise during the fade-out; I don't know what could be causing that.
The melodies are clear, and the harmonies make sense, so I think you've done a great job arranging this piece.