[WIP][Pony][TLK2] Ascension (Feedback requested!)

[Sonic Breakbeat]

I really need to go to sleep.

Yea, the pony tag is in there, though the song shows no sign of being pony-related; but it is VERY pony-inspired. Figure you take my original song Vertigo, which is about Fluttershy struggling to fly, add some roughness and more drive, and you got this, which is about Rainbow Dash soaring through the skies and having a blast doing so. I do hope to get some short samples from the show, however, if I have time.

This is my track for The Lesser Knowns II. All feedback is EXTREMELY welcome! If you really like it, and don't have any feedback to give me, just tell me what you like about it! That helps too

[UPDATE]
Added some things, added pony samples, etc. I NEED criticism on the samples pretty badly!

[UPDATE 2]
Extended the track, made it private so much regular followers don't get a hold of it, changed a few things with the samples, etc. I STILL NEED CRITICISM!!

http://soundcloud.com/epicallyawsm/ascension-tlk2-full-wip/s-i50v6

[colortwelve]

I do so love where you get your melodies

[Sonic Breakbeat]

Bump! Updated the WIP.

[Sonic Breakbeat]

Bump again! Updated the WIP again.
I feel naughty for double bumping, but hey, it's better than making a whole new thread, right? o_o

[TheMalenEst]

This is just awesome! Nice work