<Pony...> Zecora's Thoughts of the Everfree <Original>

[VINXIS]

ProcRAdocks, and VINXIS make another collab, omygosh.

http://soundcloud.com/omar-yaseen-kamal/zecoras-thoughts-of-the
Pt.1: 0:00-0:43
Pt.2: 0:43-2:05
Pt.3: 2:05-2:44
Pt.4: 2:44-4:30 (ProcRAdocks made this lol)
Pt.5: 4:30-5:30 (This part I made because I was high on Dr.Pepper >:D)
Pt:6 5:30-End betches :3

[VINXIS]

What should I fix before I upload to youtube??

[Edened]

What should I fix before I upload to youtube??

Yeah probably, youtube is mainly meant for finished products that are completely done.

As for the song
When the guitar comes in at 2:58 it is way too loud. I love the flute that comes in after it too.
WTF is that transition at 5:00. It actually hurt my ears haha.
Well, I like the more chill and peaceful parts of this track, but when it gets all crazy it's always too loud and doesn't really fit the song. You should fix the mixing issues and as for the other parts that's up to you.

Keep in mind this is just my opinion and you don't actually have to take any of this advice.
It has potential to be a really good song but it just needs to be cleaned up.

[VINXIS]

Ik I was high when I made that, I'm completly changing that part, just take the note that I never actually worked on pt.5 o.o. ProcRAdocks made all of pt.4 (the flute and guitar solo, the guitar is the real instrument). He doesn't want to change his solo when I told him to like yesterday -.- o well. I'm fixing anyways.

[VINXIS]

btw, when I was making that part at 5:00 I was like http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t348e24vDyA