So i've been working on hardstyle i need your feedback

[Facade]

as of lately I've been working hard on hardstyle and I'm at the point where i can ask you guys what needs improvement / tweaking
here is what i have so far
https://dl.dropbox.com/u/58232966/needsfeedback.mp3
other then that i have a few melodies that i made
oh and don't worry this will be a full song eventually!
thanks for any feedback!
cheers ^.^

[Triple_B]

I really, really, really dig the melody. A lot. And the lead.

Though the kick is.... interesting?

This is what I use for my kicks like that;

Hardcore kicks 2; (30 Euro) http://www.kvraudio.com/product/hardcor ... orestylerz
Hardcore Kicks 1; http://176.9.137.206/~thecores/index.ph ... Itemid=147

I've gotten mixed results. Then again, Hardstyle, as much as I love it, isn't my genre of choice to produce, so I haven't put a lot of time into it.

[Facade]

I really, really, really dig the melody. A lot. And the lead.

Though the kick is.... interesting?

thanks!
the kick is the hardest part for me i spent the last 4 days working on it
it's definitely a lot better then my old ones at least :p

[Triple_B]

I agree.

[soultensionbenjamin]

sounds more jump style than hard style but this is very good

[Facade]

sounds more jump style than hard style but this is very good

thanks though i don't know a lot about jumpstyle i thought the main difference was the melodies are different and jumpstyle had a cleaner kick. im no expert though

[Sugarholik]

You could highpass the supersaw for clarity. I think it battles with the kick. And your kicks need snappier transient. Maybe cut the transient from a kick and layer it with this one. Also try EQing the kick so that you boost 400 - 1000 Hz. That should make it a bit crunchier. Admittedly kicks are really hard to make in hardstyle. (nomen est omen )

But this is gonna be good!

[Nix_Spark]

The kick sounds weird.

Also you could try making the leads a bit sharper by pulling the EQ treble band up ^^

[Facade]

The kick sounds weird.

Also you could try making the leads a bit sharper by pulling the EQ treble band up ^^

still a wip :p
and yea i noticed that after i rendered it should be more fixed now

[Facade]

But this is gonna be good!

thanks ^.^
i noticed how the lead fights with the kick im gonna try to clean that up more