<pony><original> C12 & Vladnuke - Bittersweet

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<pony><original> C12 & Vladnuke - Bittersweet

Postby colortwelve » 23 Jun 2012 13:50

This fucking song. It's gone through so many incarnations; some of you may remember when I posted an instrumental, 13-minute version of this a month or two ago. It started with a simple loop Codeum gave me, and now it's some weird mix of deadmau5-type prog-house and liquid dubstep, with vocals provided by my best bro, Vladnuke. It also happens to be the first track from my album that I'm actually showing off in its fully completed form (well, 'Kyoga Sleeps' might count... All I've changed is a few sounds, but screw it, this feels more official because it marked me finally getting out a vocal track).

As proud as I am to have actually finished it, I'm sure there's plenty wrong with it, so power up the criticism cannon, if you will :D

http://soundcloud.com/colortwelve/bittersweet-album-v

EDIT: Now with chicken Youtube!
Youtube -- Soundcloud -- Tumblr -- Bandcamp (new album out!)

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Re: <pony><original> C12 & Vladnuke - Bittersweet

Postby Captain Ironhelm » 23 Jun 2012 16:25

The vocals are kind of hard to hear, too quiet.
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Re: <pony><original> C12 & Vladnuke - Bittersweet

Postby ChromaticChaosPony » 23 Jun 2012 17:16

True. Vocals need more volume.

Other than that, great song.
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