Could you tell me what is wrong with this?

[senntenial]

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/62916279/french ... 07drop.mp3

Yessir. The droppy thingy. I think why it doesn't sound good is due to some EQing, mainly with the bass and the kick conflicting, and there not being many high freqs... also I have no idea where to go after this section is over... Ugh. If you could, give suggestions on how to make it sound better. <3

[Obstreperous Synapse]

Sounds good, real good.

More sub bass is always recommended.

[Icky]

Mixing needs work, sounds really muddy to me. try giving all the sounds their own room in the mix using EQ.

[Facade]

Mixing needs work, sounds really muddy to me. try giving all the sounds their own room in the mix using EQ.

^ that
other then that it sounds great

[senntenial]

Well, yee, I understand that. I guess I'm saying I'm not that sure where to cut and peak freqs on which instruments. I guess experimentation is the only way.