<PONY-ish><Original> Punch Holes in the Sky

[Mush]

I have made another original track. I should really stop, its not good for my sanity to look at green rectangles for so long.

http://soundcloud.com/stevenmagnet/punch-holes-in-the-sky

Please comment/critique as you will. I won't be changing this one, but I will take what is said on board for my next one.

[LoreRD]

Most of it sounds nice, but I wish it would be more varied. Right now there's two different parts and that's it for about 3 min, which makes it sound repetitive. Also, one of the instruments (the one that starts at ~0:34 sounds like an odd choice. Maybe something less harsh?
That's the "negative". The positive is that the rest of the instruments sounds great and you have a solid melody throughout.

[Mush]

Okay.
So, in future, keep out the harsh instruments and make more varied.

And I am glad you liked the rest of it!

[LoreRD]

Don't necessarily keep out all harsh instruments. It's just that one didn't seem like great fit for the song. Also, this is just one opinion, so keep in mind that it may not be the general opinion.