<non-pony><original> Space - Facade DnB

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<non-pony><original> Space - Facade DnB

Postby Facade » 03 Jun 2012 18:34

http://soundcloud.com/petfood56/space
looking for some constructive critique :D
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Re: <non-pony><original> Space - Facade

Postby colortwelve » 03 Jun 2012 18:45

Interesting idea, but...
-Make the snare bigger by giving it more midrange.
-Either make your own patch or use a different (i.e. less recognizable) preset for the lead that plays over the bassdrops.
-Vary it up a little instead of just repeating the bassdrop. Maybe add some distortion to the bass the second time around, or make the lead more intricate, or something.

It's not terrible as it is, but I'd be interested to see where you went with it if you're still working on it :D
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Re: <non-pony><original> Space - Facade DnB

Postby Facade » 03 Jun 2012 18:52

thanks for the tips ill try to use these next time!
https://facadeofages.bandcamp.com/album ... o-the-dark
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