<PONY><BALLOON PARTY><Kyoga - Earthbound Feedback! :D

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Re: <PONY><BALLOON PARTY><Kyoga - Earthbound Feedback! :D

Postby Indigo Spectrum » 29 May 2012 21:56

Oh man, this is really good.
Looking forward to seeing this in the album!
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Re: <PONY><BALLOON PARTY><Kyoga - Earthbound Feedback! :D

Postby Matthew N. » 30 May 2012 00:19

I'd flatten that intro rev. crash a little bit more. Even in the waveform you can see how it stands out.
That break at 0:59 feels very anticlimactic. Maybe fill it with the same kick drum, just cut it 1/2 step? Or some sort of drop? I don't know, it feels kinda empty'ish. 2:49 needs some lighter white noise sweep or a longer, reverbed crash to better introduce the last part. One last thing: I assume this is a WIP, hence why the track cuts so short and doesn't let the last crash fade out completely.

I don't like to comment on the more creative part for obvious reasons. I always like to leave the things to the artist him/herself here. He/she always know what's best for them.
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Re: <PONY><BALLOON PARTY><Kyoga - Earthbound Feedback! :D

Postby Matthew N. » 30 May 2012 10:05

And vice versa, mate.
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Re: <PONY><BALLOON PARTY><Kyoga - Earthbound Feedback! :D

Postby XXDarkShadow79XX » 31 May 2012 19:26

Refer to my signature.
Seriously, I decided to add that because that's all I post on other people's tracks.
"Derr, add moar sub bass."
"Durp, get subsonic."
"HERR DERR SUB DERR"
Seriously, I need to give other forms of criticism a try. (Subsonic is a fantastic vst though)
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Re: <PONY><BALLOON PARTY><Kyoga - Earthbound Feedback! :D

Postby Facade » 31 May 2012 20:42

haha i heard this one earlier real great!
https://facadeofages.bandcamp.com/album ... o-the-dark
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Re: <PONY><BALLOON PARTY><Kyoga - Earthbound Feedback! :D

Postby Facade » 31 May 2012 20:53

XXDarkShadow79XX wrote: (Subsonic is a fantastic vst though)

haha i use it too great vst xD
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Re: <PONY><BALLOON PARTY><Kyoga - Earthbound Feedback! :D

Postby Facade » 31 May 2012 21:53

its a vst plugin works with any daw that supports vsts
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Re: <PONY><BALLOON PARTY><Kyoga - Earthbound Feedback! :D

Postby Facade » 31 May 2012 22:11

its free go grab it xD
https://facadeofages.bandcamp.com/album ... o-the-dark
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Re: <PONY><BALLOON PARTY><Kyoga - Earthbound Feedback! :D

Postby K3WRO » 01 Jun 2012 03:43

Are you talking about the one in the Itchy vst pack?

Man, It get's fun if you add some automation on the pitch, phaser, freq knob.

Go get it, it's FREE (unlike massive)
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Re: <PONY><BALLOON PARTY><Kyoga - Earthbound Feedback! :D

Postby K3WRO » 02 Jun 2012 03:47

Kyoga wrote:
K3WRO wrote:Are you talking about the one in the Itchy vst pack?

Man, It get's fun if you add some automation on the pitch, phaser, freq knob.

Go get it, it's FREE (unlike massive)



If I get this thing, I'll probably just split it open and steal their code. XD


I wanna see you try.

Maybe your gonna multiply it's Oscillators by 100 or something, Don't do it, it'll sound crappy since it's a subbass synthesizer XD
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Re: <PONY><BALLOON PARTY><Kyoga - Earthbound Feedback! :D

Postby K3WRO » 03 Jun 2012 03:06

if you ever heard "if equestria burns" I had 112 oscillators in there.
It was boss.

not to mention, freeware is usually scantily programmed. :3[/quote]

I would'nt say that, I think it's pretty neat
http://www.flstudiomusic.com/2010/01/itchy-dubstep-vsti-pack.html
By the way, do you use C++ for scripting? And those templates from Steinburg's site to make vsts?
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Re: <PONY><BALLOON PARTY><Kyoga - Earthbound Feedback! :D

Postby XXDarkShadow79XX » 03 Jun 2012 20:05

Kyoga wrote:
XXDarkShadow79XX wrote:Refer to my signature.
Seriously, I decided to add that because that's all I post on other people's tracks.
"Derr, add moar sub bass."
"Durp, get subsonic."
"HERR DERR SUB DERR"
Seriously, I need to give other forms of criticism a try. (Subsonic is a fantastic vst though)



thanks for that. :D i'll make sure to add moar subz to the others.

Did it have enough cowbell for your tastes?


I do believe that the level of cattle-related percussion was indeed satisfactory.
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Re: <PONY><BALLOON PARTY><Kyoga - Earthbound Feedback! :D

Postby K3WRO » 04 Jun 2012 01:03

Kyoga wrote:i've never been to steinburg's site.
Do you have a link?

and i use C++ for everything in my oscillators, except for extracting wavetables. I use java for that, but I suck at java so far.


http://www.steinberg.net/en/company/developer.html

It has a few seperate SDKs, most recent version is like 3.9 I think? But it has version 2.3 or something for the "experienced" ones who are used to the old ones and hate the new UI.

They also have an ASIO sdk
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