<remix><pony> This Day Aria (remix)

[Metabrony]

My second remix

http://soundcloud.com/supergeek-1/this-day-aria-remix

[vladnuke]

This is really nice! For only your second remix, this showcases a lot of skill. I could do without the oontz oontz bit at the end, just stylistically, but overall a wonderful piece.

[Matthew N.]

I know I shouldn't go hard on you and I won't, but what this needs the most is proper mastering. In some "main" parts of the track there is a lot of distortion caused by overlapping frequencies of a variety of instruments and synths (e.g. 3:35 - 3:50.) The "boom" effect is definitely too high on low frequencies. The claps are too low on pitch - they do not go well with your melody key.

What you need to try to do - even with this song, just for fun of learning (go Twilight Sparkle on this) - is to equalize it and do some sidechaining with pads and maybe slightly on those snynt lines.

This is not bad, but it can be improved.

[Facade]

i agree with vlad definitely showcases some skill! but it does need some proper mixing and mastering

[Sgt-Whip (DJQ)]

My biggest issue is with your lead sound at 1:03. It just sound very muddy, and even throughout the track. I also think the melody loops in an awkward fashion and I realize that this is a big style choice. I'm just not a big fan of the quintuple meter (stop me if I'm wrong) melody at 1:30 while the rest is going in common time. Also, at 3:55 it sounds very distorted, and the oontz at the end sounds like its changed songs. Its great for leading out of in a DJ set, but it doesn't seem like its very necessary if a brand new song could literally create the same feel of a sudden shift.

But you've got a good melody and dance-able parts. I highly recommend trying what Matthew_N says. Its good advise.

[Metabrony]

Yeah, I seriously need to look more into mastering and music theory.
and thanks everyone for the feedback it means a lot

[Matthew N.]

Yeah, I seriously need to look more into mastering and music theory.
and thanks everyone for the feedback it means a lot

If there is a music genre that I know some stuff about then I am most likely to give some feedback. Unfortunately, I don't receive much of it for my own WIPs, so at least I can be the one who gives it around.