<non-pony> <original> Good Point

[Edened]

I made this in a short amount of time but it seemed to have come out fairly good in my opinion. As always, criticism would be helpful and if there is anything at all that bothers you about this track feel for to say so.

http://soundcloud.com/edened/good-point

[randomblockfilms]

dat percussion is bopin'! i like it lots!! though it could use some more saw in the bass. the sine wave isn't very clear. but if you want to stick with a sine wave, then take your bass melody that you already have, copy it, and paste it an octave higher or lower. idk if that will work or not but sometimes it does.

[Edened]

instead of just dropping the drums like happened here, I think you should fade them out (probably with a filter+volume control, and then rapidly resume them when you want to bring them back in. That's the only thing that bothered me, when that rockin' drum beat went away...

Yea I know exactly what you mean. I always just cut off the drum track instead of fading it, for some always forget to

I kinda expected it to be a little more intense after the first buildup but didn't end up getting that.

I was thinking about adding that melody that came in toward the middle at that point, but decided to save it for later because I knew I would be repeating it more. The buildup must have just been left from when I did have it in there.

the sine wave isn't very clear.

Wow I just noticed this. I think it did that when I exported it or something because I don't remember it sounding like that. Oh well, could be worse I suppose.

[Edened]

I actually thought that sin wave was intentional the way it was. I really liked it.

uhhh yea lets just go with that. Definitely intentional
You are right though, it doesn't sound bad, its just different. I'll take it.