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<wip>< Original> New guy over here!

Postby kingsleyrulz » 23 Apr 2012 17:59

Hello! I'm new here and have been making music for only about a month or two and need some pointers.

http://soundcloud.com/kingsleyrulz/techno-house-thing-3

http://soundcloud.com/kingsleyrulz/call ... u-will-1-0

I also am trying to make piano tunes as well as some more orchestral pieces, but most are electric.

That is all :D


EDIT:

new creepy one! and update for the first!

http://soundcloud.com/kingsleyrulz/these-were-meadows

and a maybe hard *cough balloon party* song.

http://soundcloud.com/kingsleyrulz/time-for-balloons-2
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Re: New guy over here!

Postby Sugarholik » 26 Apr 2012 04:43

Howdy!
Alrite. First:
-A compressor might do wonders for this one.
-Kicks are really silent. This will likely be fixed with compressor. If you feel like it, you can also try side chain compression.
-0:34 there's some dissonance. Sounds like bass playing multiple notes, which shouldn't happen.
-2:30 That rising saw is quite loud
Fix those for now.

Second:
-Hear that wobbling starting 0:30? That's caused by limiter. Drop the volume a bit and it's gone. If it's too silent then, again, use compressor.
-1:41 the percussion is a bit weird for me, but that's a matter of taste
-Otherwise loved it!

Gotta give you respect for using alot of melodies. Keep it up!
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Re: New guy over here!

Postby kingsleyrulz » 26 Apr 2012 19:28

Thank you so much for the feedback! The information on the effects really helped.
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