<Non-Pony> <Progress House> Please Critique.

[A.I. Music]

I get no critique, and it's what I really need to progress :(
Anyways, here's a house track I spent about three days on. Please tell me what you think.



-Alexander

[colortwelve]

Just me being nitpicky, this is closer to trance than progressive house, what with the 140bpm and the faster progression.

Anyway, on to the feedback and stuff. I think your pluck could use some variation to it - switch up the melody, try some automation, etc., and boost the midrange frequencies on it, because as a part of the lead it should sort of pop out of the mix, which this one doesn't. And just in general, it could use some fleshing out melodically, as I didn't hear a ton going on aside from the piano and the pluck. As a general rule, a track should sound like it's going somewhere, and this honestly doesn't really go anywhere.

But a good bit more work and I think you could really bring out the hint of epic I could hear at the beginning. And I do like the pluck synth, very nice.