<non-pony> <original> <instrumental> Air Holes. Critique me

[Maniac Shelve]

I'm posting this purely to get feedback.

Don't hold back, I'm new to music production.

[the4thImpulse]

There are some good ideas in this track but it very much suffers from the 'I'm new to production' sound. There is a weird pulsing in the volume of a synth at 1:45 - 2:12. It needs a lot of eqing on every sound in the track. Thats all I got, keep working at production and you will get better.

[Belgerum]

Well, I can't say much about music production, but I didn't notice that many precise pitches in this. The only pitches that really stood out were the bass and melodic line, while the rest seems almost atonal. I can see what you're going for with this piece, and it does get an interesting feel from these, but I feel it could gain much more stability if you made some occasional blaring chords, or more background lines to make the pitches more defined.