<Non-Pony> <WIP> Week 2

[Mugofrootbeer]

I've decided to make a song a week to improve my musicianship. This is a WIP of week 2 which will hopefully be done by this Sunday.

I'm not totally sure what genre this would be. I kinda just play melodies and sounds that I think sound pretty cool.

Any feedback would be greatly appreciated.

http://soundcloud.com/mugofrootbeer/week-2-wip

[MasterOfRegret]

You've got a great framework!
I'd work on bringing out the clap/snare thing and drum, they sound like they are just sitting there in the mix, and yeah, I understand that this is just a WIP.
I'd widen the sounds especially that synth that is slightly panned right a little and the stereo mix a little more too.
I think you have good transitions! The only thing I don't like so much is your choice of synths because they sound rough, but I don't like ANY like that so I would disregard that statement entirely.

But yeah, sounds good! Keep your deadline! It pays in the long run, even if you don't 100% like your song.