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<Pony> <Original> Monitors by Lunarz

Postby lunarz » 16 Mar 2012 16:04

http://soundcloud.com/officiallunarz/lunarz-monitors
Dubstep with samples of twilight in, my 1st real attempt at dubstep
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Re: <Pony> <Original> Monitors by Lunarz

Postby XiF » 16 Mar 2012 16:35

Nice one, Lunarz! I like your music.
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Re: <Pony> <Original> Monitors by Lunarz

Postby Freewave » 16 Mar 2012 16:51

Quite good man! Some CRAZY sounds in there. I'd make those pony samples more prominant (or recognizable) as it doesn't feel pony enough to me, but hey thats me (i like having a theme or inspiration to a track vs just the music).
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Re: <Pony> <Original> Monitors by Lunarz

Postby lunarz » 16 Mar 2012 16:55

@dj pon3 yeah im still newb with samples and i had to kinda embed them, otherwise the song wouldnt flow, i didnt know where to put more so yeah xD i will create a decent pony song with a fuckton of pony quotes in soon :P.

@ XiF cheers man, your music si pretty good too :D
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Re: <Pony> <Original> Monitors by Lunarz

Postby the4thImpulse » 16 Mar 2012 16:56

lunarz wrote:Dubstep with samples of twilight in, my 1st real attempt at dubstep

Intro is really weird, I like it! those drums at :42 are interesting, I'm not a fan but they aren't bad. The vocals in the drop are too quite, and where are the drums??? You got some nice wobbles missing a little bass and drums... Nevermind theres the bass, To make to drop mean something you should put the drums and bass at 1:22. Your kick is great the snare could use a little verb imo but thats up to you. Your vocoding is great but still to quite. I would if you changed the main wobble more often.

All in all this much better dubstep then I can make and great start to a track.
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Re: <Pony> <Original> Monitors by Lunarz

Postby XiF » 16 Mar 2012 17:00

lunarz wrote:@ XiF cheers man, your music si pretty good too :D

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Re: <Pony> <Original> Monitors by Lunarz

Postby lunarz » 16 Mar 2012 17:27

the4thImpulse wrote:
lunarz wrote:Dubstep with samples of twilight in, my 1st real attempt at dubstep

Intro is really weird, I like it! those drums at :42 are interesting, I'm not a fan but they aren't bad. The vocals in the drop are too quite, and where are the drums??? You got some nice wobbles missing a little bass and drums... Nevermind theres the bass, To make to drop mean something you should put the drums and bass at 1:22. Your kick is great the snare could use a little verb imo but thats up to you. Your vocoding is great but still to quite. I would if you changed the main wobble more often.

All in all this much better dubstep then I can make and great start to a track.


Intro is supposed to be like that, i like weird dark sounding things hehe, nd cheers for the feedback, hopefully my next dubstep will be much much better :P. Thankyou!
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