[Non-Pony][Glitch-Hop] The Shell

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[Non-Pony][Glitch-Hop] The Shell

Postby Genkar » 20 Feb 2014 17:46

https://soundcloud.com/genkar/the-shell
This is my first original in over 6 months, and while I like it, personally it doesn't quite hit the quality bar I wanted it to. Feedback of all kinds would be sweet. :D
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Re: [Non-Pony][Glitch-Hop] The Shell

Postby Guthey » 20 Feb 2014 19:27

That neuro is eargasmic. I kind of think that there is a little too much stereo on the bass, but that's just personal preference.

Anyways, feedback! First of all, this pretty well done. the bass production is very good. One thing that sounds a little strange is that high pitched click at the end of the Rev-snare, during the first and 2nd drop, it sounds like "Donk!". It's not that big of a deal, it just sounds a little strange. This sounds a little like a chiptune, which is pretty nice, I like chiptune. Song structure seems pretty good, maybe a riser would sort of help build the drop a little, just to make it a little more "filled," per-say. You kind of just drop it, there wasn't really anything to build off of, not even a faster paced kick. Don't get me wrong, it still sounds nice, but the riser just emphasizes the drop, like something we've been waiting a long time for. Also, the bass doesn't sound like it's that loud at all, usually it's just as prevalent as the kick or lead, esp. at 3:11-3:12, seem like the kick is overriding it, but just a little; it's heard, but it just seems like it could be a little louder.

Overall, though, this sounds very well made, I can't really say more as I don't want to sound too opinionated, but good job nonetheless.
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