by Injustrial » 24 Nov 2013 16:09
While the melody works well on its own, I'm not too big on the vocals. They seem very garbled and messy to me.
The wobbly bass-parts are really cool, but I would have loved it to be more marked. It sounds a bit muddy to me and I have trouble making out the notes.(I'm the biggest hypocrite ever right now)
It's not bad at all, and some parts are pretty interesting. But as said, I would love to be able to distinguish the different notes better. You have some pretty nice melodies and beats going on. Just a little tuning on the attacks and pitch-bends, and I think you're golden