<non-pony><Progressive House>Morning on the Moon (VIP)

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<non-pony><Progressive House>Morning on the Moon (VIP)

Postby DJSadEyez » 20 Nov 2013 08:47

Hey Fellas,

have a new track / VIP / WIP

https://soundcloud.com/djsadeyez/morning-on-the-moon-vip

have fun, feedback appreciated!
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Re: <non-pony><Progressive House>Morning on the Moon (VIP)

Postby Wisp » 20 Nov 2013 11:45

Ooh I like this! Very nice job with the synths, and the melody's pretty good too!
The mixing and drums during the chorus could definitely use some work, though. The kick sounds like it has very little high end and doesn't really stand out enough. The clap that comes in half way through the chorus is very quiet and sounds like it should be louder. As for the mixing, things get a bit muddy once the chorus hits. It's not really a huge problem, though, and could probably be fixed with a little bit of EQing.
Overall, very nice job!
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Re: <non-pony><Progressive House>Morning on the Moon (VIP)

Postby DJSadEyez » 20 Nov 2013 16:03

Lol, Yeah, i havent EQd it. I was Too Lazy, Because i didnt know what to do, to make it hearable. Because it was just the Penetrating Sound of the Universe. I was fixed on this.

Aaaaand.... There is no Clap BTW ....

Should probably Need a Singer... That could fix a Lot, Too...
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Re: <non-pony><Progressive House>Morning on the Moon (VIP)

Postby HMage » 20 Nov 2013 16:12

Interesting part starts only at 0:33. That seems pretty far away, imho.

Kick is very weak, like it's there, but at same time it's not. I wouldn't be compelled to dance to that, if it's a dancefloor track.

Tame your saws, they feel too loud.

I like the instrument that plays at 0:33 the most.
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Re: <non-pony><Progressive House>Morning on the Moon (VIP)

Postby DJSadEyez » 27 Nov 2013 06:47

Thank you for your Feedback! I don't know what is going on with that kick, it's wether too loud or too weak.
The SAWs aren't that loud imo. But I will take a look at it.
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