by ph00tbag » 03 Aug 2013 17:18
Well, there's some interesting things going on here. Depending on what you were going for, I'd have different things to say. If you were going for something really experimental and avant garde, you'd have something really neat, here.
I will say if you're going for a bit more standard dnb, then thing that I'd say to do first and foremost, is to work on the snare drum layering, because it doesn't really have any punch to it. It has some processing before I'd say it's ready. Depending on how accessible you want the tune to be, I'd also tone down the complexity of the drums. They seem to be more about machine-gunning than about actually conveying the beat. Who knows, you may also want more reese sound on the bassline, too. Though the reese levels are definitely up to you.