CMC:ADoA | Fluttershy's Cottage work in progress

[Biff0r]

Alright, lemme try this soundcloud thingie...
http://soundcloud.com/bufbaf/cmc-fluttershywip

Is it working? That's a melody I'm currently working on (well, one of a handfull) for our CMC Adventure game. The scene will look pretty much like this:
http://i245.photobucket.com/albums/gg78 ... ep1714.png

I guess I'll try to make it a bit more soothing, though, didn't quite figure out how. I can't stand 'boring' calm tracks while working on them

Well, I'll be updating this as I go, so let me know what you think

edit: I didn't fine-tune a lot of panning, volumes and that focus-thing from my "help me!"-Thread, just in case you're wondering if I actually listen to all your great hints. I am

[UnderpΩny]

I liked it.
I would suggest EQing some of the bass frequencies out of the drums. Not too much, but currently they don't fit in that well. It should make it a bit more soft and light-hearted.

[Solarsail]

Subscribed to your SC page immediately.

I love how it is still upbeat and interesting while still fitting the setting perfectly. To often adventure games just have ambience.

[Biff0r]

Alright, I'm done

http://soundcloud.com/bufbaf/fluttershy-cmc-final-for-real

Hope you like it a bit. Can this be moved to "completed" or should I open up a new thread?

[Rumpy]

If possible, consider getting rid of the clicking thing right at the start of the track. Other than that, it's going to be very adequate for its purpose.

[Freewave]

nice and fluffy. i like it. especially the backing synth that comes in late.

[Overkillius]

Ok... I might be crazy or stupidly opinionated or something here, but I think there is a certain beauty in a simple drum beat. This song could do with less going on in the drum part! Very nice though! following you on SC.

[Biff0r]

Yeah, that's probably one of my bigger flaws, I'm always thinking about adding more and more stuff, and then the whole thing becomes convoluted somehow - gotta work on that