Dashing Rainbows (Original)

[Flaedr]

Oh man, the first thing I'm showing off... so nervous right now...

Anyways, this is a little song I had to make for a friend, and he requested for it Wednesday, but the thing is, he needed it by the beginning of Friday (Today). And considering that it was Thanksgiving, I really did not have too much time to do this. But, I somehow got it done in time, and I present to you, my first song on here, Dashing Rainbows.

(I know it's repetitive at the end, but once again, not much time to do this)


http://soundcloud.com/synth-crescendo/dashing-rainbows

[Dr_Dissonance]

Hey, welcome to the forums!

This was quite a nice piece! Interesting use of harmonies in places, I wasn't expecting them, considering it's about Rainbow...

Thoughts for improving:
1) Reverb, the strings sound really dry, so maybe add some reverb? Or add more if you already have?
2) Voices, I only heard, maybe two voices at once, tops, throughout the piece. If you want to make something more interesting, add more voices!
3) Repetition, you've already stated this, so I won't say any more!

That's my 5 minute analysis! Enjoy!

Oh and a good start, I hope to see more from you!

[Freewave]

I like that this is a mix of the synphonic and electronic, it really works that way. I think Dr Dissonance's critique's are valid if you want to take it to the next level (remix it once more) but this is good overall.