"Elec orchestral" music, based on NMM and Celestia

[DasDeer]

Soooo, i've spent the last week or so creating this tune, inspired and based on Nightmare Moon and Celestia.

It was my first time trying to create Orchestral song with Electronical features, and thus i want to ask for some feedback from you guys.
I've already recieved some feedback on Youtube, but not an awful lot.

So, what do you guys think? What should i improve?
Personally, some of the electronical things just feel a bit... Off, so to speak.

[Dr_Dissonance]

I felt that opening timpani felt completely out of place! Also, it kind of just ends...maybe make the end sound more complete!

But overall, pretty good!

[DasDeer]

Oh, i wasn't aware of that abruptly stop at the end. Thanks for pointing it out, and thanks for the feedback.

[Freewave]

a little bipolar but there's obviously quite a lot of potential in here. kinda muddy in places but otherwise it sounds good. keep at it.