My first song "Homebound"

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My first song "Homebound"

Postby AshenFlash » 30 May 2013 14:03

Hey guys, this is my first song, care to leave some feedback?
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Re: My first song "Homebound"

Postby xethias » 31 May 2013 00:42

pretty good for a first, what genre would you put yourself in?
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Re: My first song "Homebound"

Postby SkruffyPony » 31 May 2013 00:58

I like it! Very good for a first song.

The mix sits pretty nicely in all aspects. My only criticism would to bring the vocals you introduced in the later part of the track more toward the front & center of the mix, as they sound a little bit too quiet compared to the rest of the track.

Very atmospheric and ambient vibe. Keep it up! It really is a promising start for you!
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Re: My first song "Homebound"

Postby AshenFlash » 31 May 2013 14:19

Well, I'd put in a "Light Trance" genre, and thank you :D
xethias wrote:pretty good for a first, what genre would you put yourself in?
Thanks for the feedback, definitely going to try some different things for vocals in my next song :3[quote="SkruffyPony"]I like it! Very good for a first song.
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