Pony Suite: I. I'll Come Back For You (Fixed)

[Dr_Dissonance]

NEED OPINIONZ

My first attempt at a piece using Hollywood Strings and Brass...I must say, they are quite difficult to use...no master keyswitch...which is rather annoying, as I now have to devise a whole new strategy to writing 'fake' acoustic music...

Things I know that are an issue:
FIXED THOSE ISSUES FFFF YEAH!!!!


But any other issues, compositionally or otherwise, that need to be addressed???

[Tsyolin]

Yeah I can tell what you mean with the clipping, pretty noticeable. That has to get be something to get fixed, after that though it gets better. I'm gonna spare the rest of the details because I'm pretty sure that you already know them anyways. Otherwise it sounds nice.

[Dr_Dissonance]

Fixed it! Man, I feel so much better now...

[BlackElectric]

0:16 - 0:26

It sounds like the guitars are just a tad bit off beat there. The seem to be a bit early.

Other than that, I think it sounds awesome!

[ForeverOdin]

Sounds great! Flows nicely, lots of interpretation, and I didn't hear it before you fixed the issues, but it seems like whatever they were, they're perfectly fine now.
I especially like the piano breaks and the tom-heavy sections. Nicely done.

(Also, dat picture kicks flank).

[ClutterTrot]

[ego post]This unbelievably awesome man.[/ego post]

Edit: More Information here.

[Freewave]

yeah the initial guitars may a bit off, after that it soars! good job as always.