@LFPThis intro is sounding pretty solid. I love those cymbals. The kick feels a bit too long, almost like it should be punchier or more staccato. That's more of an opinionated thing though. I'm loving the melody, and that lead is pretty cool. Around 0:52, it sounds kinda empty. I love those chior-ish pads around 1:09. I'd definitely work on the transition around 1:26. Maybe add some kind of white noise build? The next section sounds pretty cool, and the transition into 1:45 is pretty solid, it gives it a really climactic feeling. The lead around 2:19 should probably stand out more, it's getting kinda drowned out now.
Overall, I really love the mood you're giving that, and I'm also loving your sound design. Really, the only real problems I could find in that were small things. I'd love to hear the full thing once it's finished.
@CallenbyI really don't know how much of a help I'd be on this, but I did listen to the whole thing, and it sounds pretty great to me, I love the mood of the whole thing. I'd say you captured the idea you were going for pretty well, and the only major issue I had with it (and this is more of a personal thing), was that it felt pretty repetitive after a while.
Sorry I can't really give too much feedback on this. :/
@BelgerumThe beginning feels a bit muffled, not sure if that was a desired effect or not. That first transition could use some work too, it's just kinda quiet, and then everything's in, with not much of a build. That lead at 0:24 could be more prominent too, it's kinda hard to make out. I imagine it'll sound much better when you have someone rapping too, it's not that it sounds
empty now, but it definitely feels like it's more like an instrumental to something, rather than being a standalone piece of music. Your drums could be just a tad bit louder too. Most of the transitions I'm hearing sound fine as they are, so that's pretty good. I'm guessing there's going to be more added on to that later, because it's a tad bit short as it is.
Overall, it was pretty cool. The mood of it felt really unique, and I can't really say I've heard anything in that sort of style before. The mixing could be better though; through most of it, it sounds pretty crowded, so you can probably clean that up a bit. Another thing I noticed; it felt kinda repetitive. It's the same instruments through nearly the whole thing, and there isn't really any change of mood. This'll probably be fine once you have the vocals in, but it might be something to take into consideration.
Alright, here's what I've got:
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/4wo ... terWIP.mp3Nothing too special, just some DnB. I plan on adding more variety in the instruments, but this is where it stands now.