<Pony><Original><Chillstep> Mare in the Moon

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<Pony><Original><Chillstep> Mare in the Moon

Postby Trill-Pix » 02 Jul 2014 23:27

Hi! I'm new to this forum as of now so I hope I don't screw anything up. Heres a track I just released almost a day ago! My first attempt at Chillstep. Hope you all enjoy and thank you for the feedback and support! ^-^

https://soundcloud.com/trill-pix/trill-pix-mare-in-the-moon

Oh and heres something I did recently as well if you are interested

https://soundcloud.com/trill-pix/trill-pix-u-wot-m8

Thanks for feedback and take care!
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Re: <Pony><Original><Chillstep> Mare in the Moon

Postby Ischi Vezon » 05 Jul 2014 18:00

The snare needs some better EQing, I.E more volume, more highs. It's reverb also needs some more duration.

I am loving those weird, computer glitch sounds thrown about in there. Very subtle, but with lot's of texture. Maybe needs some gater effect that controls the panning on it, though.

The LFO on the detuned bass really served no purpose in the first climactic point, and could have used some more variety with the LFO Rate in the second.

The song sounds a bit too short, the first "Drop" (I hate that phrase) sounds much more like an intro than anything else.
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Re: <Pony><Original><Chillstep> Mare in the Moon

Postby Trill-Pix » 05 Jul 2014 20:29

Thank you! Very good ideas, especially that LFO rate variety idea! Thanks for the good feedback ^-^
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