<Original><Easy Listening/Pop>Sun Follows Moon [Luna song]

[AdamTh3Walker]

https://soundcloud.com/page-fortysix/sun-follows-moon-wip-2-0mp3
This is a work in progress from LUNA ALBUM... anybody have any ideas? is it missing anything? like it? hate it? please send help

[Guthey]

Well, this is pretty nice, easy listening is true. maybe not so much of an abrupt ending would be nice.

Sound at 3:11 sounds a little to loud, as well as its later occurrences.

Light bass thingy is a little too loud also, pretty much throughout the mid section of the song.

I like the intro, pretty nice, nice voice that is singing. Oh what a sexy voice. You little Devil you!

I don't think it's missing anything, sounds pretty nice, would definitely put this on my radio.

Spoiler Would put it on my Radio:

[Injustrial]

Overall, this is pretty nicely done. You have a nice voice and use it to good effect. The bass is, as stated, a bit too loud. It drown out the delicate high ends, which could also have been a bit lower. Overall, the intrumental is a bit too loud, but not heartbreakingly so.

Perhaps look into a de-esser or something? There's a few "spits" that seem to be very sharp to my ears, especially since you sing with such a smooth style. Some light chorus sometimes, as well as a little reverb could carry you a long way.

Raise the vocals in the humming part. They're almost completely drowning

I like this, it's very smooth and calming. Not my cup of tea, but I see what you're going for and you've succeeded in most of it