<pony><original><wip><instrumental>Meander

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<pony><original><wip><instrumental>Meander

Postby Kazantu » 30 May 2014 12:34

https://soundcloud.com/kazantu/meander-demo

So, uh, hi there. This is just something simple I mocked up in Guitar Pro a couple of weeks back. It's really barebones tbh, mostly being just acoustic and classical guitar until the end, and I think the best way of improving it would be to a) get it recorded and b) add some vocals on top. Unfortunately, I don't really have the means nor ability to do either atm. Also keep in mind that this is totally unmixed don't hurt me so the end sounds really messy. That being said, I do kind of like the way that I put in motifs from some other tracks I've been working on, even if the arpeggios at the beginning and the quiet hemiola section (which is supposed to be the main theme of the piece) do seem to get a bit repetitive. And lol, the solo; it's quite... solo-y. I hope.

From the Soundcloud description:
Kazantu wrote:They've being playing at it for a while now. The endless fugue of her friends thinking and doing inside her head has left very little room for Twilight to do any of that. It doesn't even matter that it's her mind they're trapped in.

It's a bit of a silly idea, but it's something.

So after spending a whole paragraph going on about what I think, it's probably best that I leave this to the cold, unforgiving ponies of MLR, in hopes that they are merciful in systematically destroying everything I have ever held dear :lol: Seriously though, any feedback on what I've got so far would be much appreciated!
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