<pony> <original> <instrumental> <ambient rock> Reflection

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http://www.soundcloud.com/genuinemarco/reflection

If everything works out, this track should be part of a larger Tiny Horse-themed project I'm around a third of the way through right now. Without getting into too many details, the idea behind this track is that it's meant to be about Luna shortly after being banished reflecting on and feeling guilt over her actions, and trying to convey a sorrowful, mournful kind of feel as such.

I'm mostly happy with the track - the melody guitar on the first chorus is a little off-beat on one or two notes, and the strings might need a little touching up, but my only real concern is that it's a bit repetitive. Interested in any and all feedback though, so let me know what you hear!

PS Typing this on a tablet, so if the Soundcloud doesn't work, I'll fix it tomorrow morning.

[Kazantu]

I quite liked this, actually. I agree with you in terms of repetitiveness - I think if you varied the main guitar melody a bit more throughout (you know, adding the odd flourish here and there, especially later on), then it would feel a lot more dynamic.

One thing, however: the solo at the end is really expressive imo, but I think the fadeout unnecessarily cuts it short. It's like it builds up to a peak that it never reaches. Having the fadeout occur on a reprise of the main melody after the solo might be something worth trying out.

Still, you've got something pretty great here