<non-pony> <original> Étude for Piano in F# Major.

[Docinterlude]

I created this song as a practice of the Pentatonic scale (I - II - III - V - VI). It is a simple song also a bit repetitve on the beginning... to play on the piano.
I hope you like it.

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/273 ... uggler.mp3

Sheet Music:

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/273 ... 0Score.pdf

[Callenby]

It's an interesting concept! Here are my quick thoughts:

Yes, the beginning is a little repetitive. Maybe not introducing any staccato until a bit later would help? That could be a simple way of distinguishing one bit from the rest. I feel there is a hair too much staccato at the moment.

Measures 1-13 the right hand is playing two notes while on measures 14-45 it's playing single notes. I would reverse that. It may be more of a personal thing, but going from something more simple to more complex is always a nice evolution.

This one is more of an idea, but maybe slow down the tempo by just a little? Not too much, though.

Including more of something like in measures 59-66 would be nice, I feel.

One last thing, you put "Opus 2" immediately before your own name. That sort of thing should go in the title itself or underneath it.

That's all my opinion anyway. It's a cool little piece. Definitely a