<Remix> <Non-Pony> Ocular - Timeless (9_L1v35 Remix)

[TheUncrativePony]

Alright so I've remixed a song for a competition. I'd love some feedback from you guys. Critique me pls.
https://soundcloud.com/officialaristokat/ocular-timeless-9_l1v35

[Guthey]

This is really nice, I love the rhythm of this, I can sort of imagine like some weird montage of people like working out or something.

Anyways, this seem pretty well made, the chords sound very nice, that constant vocal is nice to listen to throughout the song, a very nice touch. The kick is very nice also, nice and punchy. The lead flows nicely, not really anything bad about that either. I also like how you start the song, it has that sort of congested feel to it, up until about 17 seconds when it finally opens up, same with the ending. This seems to have a continuous groove, too, even the interludes I can tap my thumb to, I accidentally clicked the back arrow on this because of that. The cymbals are used perfectly in this, also; not over powering, not too low, not too noisy and not too high, just right.

I think this is a very pleasant song to listen to, would definitely put into my playlist of things to listen to when I'm reading a book or something. A very nice song indeed.

[TheUncrativePony]

Thanks for listening to my track Guthey! Really means a lot that you both listened and picked up on all the stuff I worked hard to perfect in the song :D (mixing alone took me 3+ hours!)