(VIP)(Industrial)(Kyoga - Of Greater Horizons)

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Re: (VIP)(Industrial)(Kyoga - Of Greater Horizons)

Postby Injustrial » 29 Mar 2014 21:17

Hmm, I'm not sure about where the Industrial parts come into play. This sounds more orchestral to me. I might be wrong, so feel free to explain this to me (use simple language, please)

Your percussion is very well made. Are they synthetic or samples? The smacky, airy hits and nice buildups help drive the track and makes it sound very dramatic.

Speaking of dramatic, your choir parts are perfectly composed, but perhaps they could be a smidge higher? Usually when I hear big movie-like scores like this, the choirs are higher in the mix. Your call, though.

There's not really anything I'm able top point at here and critique. I love it. Big, dramatic and wondrous. I want to grab my friends and traverse the world, escape from enemies and discover new land.

Great job!
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Re: (VIP)(Industrial)(Kyoga - Of Greater Horizons)

Postby Injustrial » 30 Mar 2014 09:48

Thanks for clearing that up, I'm not too familiar with the non-electronic stuff :p
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Re: (VIP)(Industrial)(Kyoga - Of Greater Horizons)

Postby Injustrial » 30 Mar 2014 18:10

How are people thinking that's a guitar? Like, really?

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Re: (VIP)(Industrial)(Kyoga - Of Greater Horizons)

Postby Guthey » 30 Mar 2014 23:32

I actually think this is a wide improvement over the original, I mostly like that plucked sound, it has a very nice melody. I could honestly listen to this all day. I'm not too good on the Industrial genre either so I can't say much other than this sounds pretty well made, and I must say that you have definitely know the dynamics and composition when it comes to this type of music because everything sounds like it fits so well together. I also agree with injustrial, this makes me want to travel the world and slay some demons and fight orcs in mordor.
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