<Dubstep><nopony> Forgotten Memories

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<Dubstep><nopony> Forgotten Memories

Postby TamashiiPony » 26 Mar 2014 21:13

https://soundcloud.com/tama_muffin/tamashii-forgotten-memories
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9fuj3_ZCx8c
My very first song (Not entirely, my first dubstep song). It toke around 7 hours or so (could've been longer it's been awhile since it was made) . I don't expect it to be the best, but i hope some of you like it and i hope to get some great feedback. c: <3
Edits: A Few presets are used (Nexus, Harmor, Massive, Sytrus).
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Re: <Dubstep><nopony> Forgotten Memories

Postby Faren » 27 Mar 2014 03:04

I like the intro, also background sounds are pretty cool. Though in my opinion it gets a little bit repetitive. Perhaps the problem is that you've introduced almost every sound at the very beginning.

Drop is harsh and that's great! Really enjoyed those growls. It's just that I think that the 1st half of it could've uses some high frequences, you've introduced them in 2nd half and it sounds awesome, but I guess the 1st one also need some, not that many though, just to keep things a little bit different.
Kick is kind of weak, it's hardly hearable in the intro, in the drop it seems like there is no kick at all.
Snare sounds punchy on the other hand and that's cool.

Overall, it is a great track! Some mixing is required but it'll come with experience. A good work you've done, keep it up!
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Re: <Dubstep><nopony> Forgotten Memories

Postby RubyVesper » 30 Mar 2014 05:37

I think the sound design is pretty goddamn phenomenal for a first track. (Assuming it is not presets). As said before, some mixing is required, the drop needs to be flattened a bit, some growls stick out a bit more than others.
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