by Twy » 25 Mar 2014 18:31
So far I'm enjoying the feel of the track and the composition and melodies, but I'm not sure I dig the sounds themselves as much. The instrument choices are fine, but they feel kinda unnatural to me. The piano has that bright impact to it that sounds kind of cheap and Nexus-y to me (not that there's really anything wrong with that) and the strings also feel a bit bright, and lack some of the subtle human inconsistencies that help make them sound natural, like vibratos and volume variations.
I realize this is pretty nit picky, and also quite subjective but there it is.
As for the dubstep part. It doesn't really kick my teeth in the way a lot of dubstep tracks might. I can't say for sure what the problem is, or if it's an obvious oversight for the genre or just anything personal taste thing of mine, but what I would do/have done is add more bass, not so much in the sub end but more mid bass sort of stuff, to contrast the rest of the track where these frequencies are relatively tamed. I also don't think the main lead during these parts, the kinda pad-y chords, fits super well to my ears, and some of the other sounds in general don't seem to flow into each other as well as they maybe could. These might just be some small things that could be solved with some EQing, but as it stands now they don't gel together quite perfectly.
But yeah, I definitely enjoy the direction you've gone with the strings and piano on top of the dubstep thing. Keep up the good work!