<nonpony><mashup> Devils Gonna Cry (deathstep)

[Revanchrist]

Since I wanna move into deathstep, here's my first attempt at it. I know the drops are trying too hard to be intense and fill way too much of the space. There are some obvious mistakes in the track, but I like the result anyway. Coming here for yet another feedback.

[Guthey]

I don't know much about this type of music, but I'd say you did a pretty decent job on it, since you're trying to get into it and there are going to be some obvious mistakes.

One thing is that the beginning seems a little too atmospheric, try lowering the ambiance a little in the beginning, I can barely hear the build.
The drop you already mentioned so I'm not going to repeat anything about it.
The snare sounds like it's eq'd a little too much on the 4000hz-8000hrz range.
The vocals are a little hard to hear during the 6:00 min marker.
The pads sounds nice, so good job there.

That's pretty much it. Again, this is decent, just keep working on it and you'll be good.