<pony><WIP>Upbeat Pop Rock Song - DivinumX

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<pony><WIP>Upbeat Pop Rock Song - DivinumX

Postby Astral » 06 Feb 2014 00:58

It's been a while since I've posted here! Anyways,

I'm looking for advice on vocals mostly; particularly in this bit. Do you overall think that I pulled off my vocals fine? Did I mix them in well? Are they clear enough? Thanks in advance for any possible advice. <3

Note: Vocals are in the chorus which starts somewhere around 55 seconds.

-DivinumX

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Re: <pony><WIP>Upbeat Pop Rock Song - DivinumX

Postby Gnarrkhaz » 06 Feb 2014 08:33

One thing is for sure: That synth is pop alright. :D

I don't have any complaints about the vocals. I think they're good. I'd say though that the kick is maybe a little bit too loud/has too much low end. I'd turn up the snare too. The distorted guitar could also use fattening. It sounds a bit hollow. Could use more distortion too.

In any case it sounds good as it is already.
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Postby Astral » 07 Feb 2014 14:32

Thanks! I really didn't experiment with the guitar tone too much. I planned on doing that later. I didn't touch the drums much either, but I do so recently and I think it sounds much better. Thanks for the advice! /)

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