< was trance/house is now dnb><long><non pony> Eta Carinae

[Berri]

a song i made today
https://soundcloud.com/theberri/berri-eta-carine-from-upcoming

[ph00tbag]

I'm not sure where this is at in terms of the composition process, but there doesn't seem to be much of a bassline, and all of the melodic elements are mixed really low. There need to be some builds in the parts before the beat comes in, and the beat itself is pretty basic.

I don't know what the band passed white noise is meant to accomplish, but I don't think it's being particularly effective at it. All it seems to be doing right now is obscuring the already quiet leads.

I guess this just sounds very much like a very early idea for a track, and nothing close to the final product. Given that, it's really tough for me to give feedback, because I don't know what's just filling in space, and is going to be worked on later.

[Berri]

yeah thing is most of this is probably gonna be scraped as it don't have the feel it had in earlier versions of this song. will post newer version soon.

[Berri]

https://soundcloud.com/theberri/the-road-wip-previously-eta
and here is the updated version, now called 'the road'.

[Berri]

[soundcloud][/soundcloud]
and here an update agian